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Friday, April 13, 2007

Untitled...oops! maybe you can suggest a title

A man, a cat and a dog
got stuck in a treacherous piece of bog.
There, they found a log
on top of which the cat began to jog

The man began to fret
while the dog began to sweat.
the cat did not fear
until the log cried "Oh dear!"

This DID NOT help the man
and the dog desperately needed to use the can.
the cat thought this was weird
and tugged at the man's beard

the man jumped out of his state
and that was the end of his fate
the dog could bear it no longer
and now he felt pangs of hunger

the log said "If you answer my doubt,
I shall surely get you out"
At that point the dog jumped about
"I'll answer anything you want!" he began to shout.

The cat was amazed
and the log was dazed
'cos they both thought that the dog was dumb
for since the begining he was sucking his thumb.

"Here it is", the log said
"Where o where can i find myself a bed?"

The cat replied "Ha ha! this is easy",
but actually he was starting to feel really queasy
Both the cat and the dogstared at each other
through gritted teeth the dog said "what's the answer brother?"

"I'll tell you the answer", the cat said,
"You can sleep right here on the dog's head"
Both the cat and the dog began to smile
as they watched the dog run a mile



Blogger adi said...

proof mistake,
second last line
cat and the log began to smile...

okay, that apart
absolutely hilarious

wish i cud write like that

waiting for the next

3:35 PM

Blogger adi said...

me first :)

3:36 PM

Blogger sraiyan said...

Actually wish i couldn't write like that i can absolutely NEVER write a serious poem in my life :(

and what was the proof mistake?
could it be the cat and the log had to smile
nah....i thought something was wrong with that line tooo
btw what about the title?

11:10 AM

Blogger Revealed said...

Yeah, it should have been the cat and the log :).

But very funny, hun :).

Title....hmmm...will think about it :)

8:18 PM

Blogger sraiyan said...

in case u haven't noticed the people reading the blog HAVE RAPIDLY decreased in other words...........DO SOMETHING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

7:54 PM

Blogger sraiyan said...

OOOOOOOOKKKKKKK!!!!!!!!!!!! thats it! i'm tired of checking this blog and wen i took my time and energy (ok it is summer hols but still) to write the poetry which NO ONE cept adi and revealed (you) read.......I've decided to say this nicely. I think we shld kill the blog and quit.................[:D] and im partly serious

10:03 PM

Blogger Revealed said...

Hahaha. Have faith, lil girl :).

5:43 AM

Blogger  said...

Weird o.O

4:25 PM

Blogger sraiyan said...

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11:28 AM

Blogger Revealed said...

@sraiyan: LOL!!!!!! Babe, we know that dude!!! Hahahahahaha. I don't think he was being negative. Lollll :))))))))

10:12 PM

Blogger adi said...

call it 'better late than never'

8:57 PM

Blogger adi said...

m i the last also :)
anyways, blogrolled u on delhidreams
hope u'll come visiting again soon
take care

1:47 PM


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