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Friday, December 22, 2006

He who Sows Winds will Reap in Whirlwinds Part II

"What exactly do you think you are doing? Get back in there......" she said. He was nearly lost in that jacket. She turned to leave but then she felt something poke her from behind. A gun. She should have known. It was kind of weird that he even lasted this long under her. "Move......into the building.....NOW!"he said in a gruff voice. "Listen....what exactly do you think you are doing??? You cannot handle this by yourself..." He grabbed her arm, stopped her short that took her by surprise. Guess she had to teach him the hard way. "Fine but we realy dont have time for hese childish games." She moved up the stairs into the building. The victim would be out soon....she had to get this over with and.....ohhhh so he had been smart. She smiled as she saw room full of thugs staring at her.

16 Comments:

Blogger Revealed said...

what?????? what HAPPENED there? Hehe!!

8:58 PM

 
Blogger Revealed said...

and a room full of thugs? how r u guys gonna get her outta here?
Psst, popsy, congrats on finishing with ur exams, calls for a party!! yayyyy

8:58 PM

 
Anonymous Anonymous said...

what happened to the lingerie store? :(

11:19 PM

 
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Nice plot development though... like an old gangster movie.

11:20 PM

 
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Hey can I use ur stories and try writing them in diff writing styles on my blog? i can't think of anything to get started off on mine. Svasti? Svasti's sis?

11:21 PM

 
Blogger Revealed said...

@BH: Will be OUR pleasure. Hehe. Knock yourself out!

11:24 PM

 
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Ok ... let me get started with ur episode.. which style do u choose?

11:24 PM

 
Blogger Revealed said...

80s intense Hollywood black n white movie style..yknw silent guys smoking cigars...n those mysterious women with veils n what not..gangsta style ;)

11:41 PM

 
Anonymous Anonymous said...

okie... i think i know what you're talking about. like the godfather kinda.

1:06 AM

 
Blogger Revealed said...

Yeah, exactly! Godfather style but with more chutzpah.

1:52 AM

 
Blogger sraiyan said...

okey with meee......buttt
@Revealed YOU are supposed to get her outta the room full'a thugs!!! u CANNOT rely on akka. Neway thnx!!!

7:58 PM

 
Blogger Cloudy said...

"Popsy?" hehehehe!

12:54 AM

 
Anonymous Anonymous said...

whatiteez????!!!!!

no updates :P

9:57 PM

 
Blogger sraiyan said...

revealed!!!!!!! u r s'posed to do the next bit faaaaast!!!!!!!! im gettin bored...

11:38 AM

 
Blogger Cloudy said...

Happy Birthday Revealed!

7:23 PM

 
Blogger Revealed said...

K guys i'm back! So an upd8 will arive pronto!

8:49 PM

 

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